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[Sue n' Clark - Challenge Accepted]

Don't be too mad Clark. That's the most attention a girl has ever given you (other than the final half of Chapter 2).

KittyhawkMontrose responds:

Hehehe... It's true! 😁

[Corvid Kid: Chapter 2 The Intruder]

Congrats on getting this in before the end of the year! You now have a volume's worth of Corvid story under your belt.

Really glad to see we're now getting somewhere narrative wise. There seems to be a strained and distant relationship between Samson and his mother (you can see it on Delilah's face). Leaves a lot of speculation to the reader on the familial dynamics. Definitely seems like Delilah is forced to be both the big sister and mother to some extent. I really like how you utilize visuals to storyboard your chapter (such as with world building and action sequences), rather than having swaths of text explaining everything. It helps me engage with the story in a way paragraphs wouldn't be able to do. Don't exactly know if I trust the Corvid Shadow to be any kind of moral authority. He seems to just show up and take Samson's arm from the previous chapter (unless there's some greater cosmic force that is yet to be revealed). Regardless, I got my eyes on that Corvid Shadow.

Slight criticism. On page 14, I didn't realize that bird demon and Samson's Corvid Shadow were two different characters. Maybe an additional page with Samson's "Companion" appearing separately could have clarified that.

From one webcomic creator to another, I say keep it grinding. In a few years we may have something truly special on our hands.

PhasmaGORE responds:

Thank you! I appreciate fellow webcomic artists lookin out for each other! I think I understand where you are coming from on your criticism as I think that page 13 (Im not not counting the cover) feels weak in how it reads and I only realized it after I had already inked it. For the next chapter, I definitely want to improve my readability!

[R.I.P. LittleBigPlanet]

God its so depressing to see it die. I'll never forget all the Emo Hero Hair kids.

martinsaenz96 responds:

I remember that so fondly, it was peak LBP2

[Happy Halloween 2024 from Montrose!]

Funny, we never would have gotten that 2B drawing, had I not gone to that Nier Concert in DC.

KittyhawkMontrose responds:

It was meant 2B! Thank you for letting us know on stream so we could have this butt, and I'm glad you had fun! Happy Halloween! 🎃🧡

[Kelly Goes Outside #1]

Nice little comic. Gives me inspiration while I struggle to produce Chapter 1 of my own.

wayyward responds:

Thank you so much! I know you can do it! I had to listen to a lot of really long podcasts to get this done xD I remember you said you scripted yours, so at least that's out of the way! :D Looking forward to seeing it!!

[Tankmas Scrumble]

Man, seeing Nelly in another art piece...I just hope she's doing alright. Good work as always.

Pommisc responds:

I believe in her!!!
Thank you for the compliment and happy holidays to you !

[Away From Bahay-Kubo]

ZAMN!!!

This is really impressive work!

QueenBoo responds:

Thanks so much, I needed to hear that.

[Witch Ranni]

Wow a front page! I have absolutely NO IDEA how that could have happened!

*winky emoji*

RickSteubens responds:

you sly devil

[Holiday Mall Nuisance]

Who's that handsome man with the body pillow?!

QueenBoo responds:

I wonder who that is— hmm