EugeneDoesArt's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sue & Clark!]

Clark's got that Handsome Squidward jawline! Meanwhile, Sue's looking like a purple version of Shelley Duvall!

BellvonArtsy responds:

Gotta have them looking their best for the photo!

[Pick Your date]

Roxy for the mosh pit and excitement. Erin for the chill vibes.

[COMMISSION: EugeneDoesArt]

Thanks again for taking my commission request! Really love how you captured Sue's stand-off nature!

[PsychoGoldfish]

A man I'd love to meet at the Cheese Cake Factory (true story)

BellvonArtsy responds:

Lmaoooo

[WANTED! Faye, Juneau, Tamag0 Sue and Clark Sprites]

Don't know why this didn't show up in the fanart tag, but I'll make sure to feature your Sue and Clark sprites.

MayaLaCookie responds:

Rip my tags (veri sad) but I'm glad you like it! It was my first time drawing them.

[Brulo stressed]

Least sweaty Italian American.

[Sue n' Clark - Challenge Accepted]

Don't be too mad Clark. That's the most attention a girl has ever given you (other than the final half of Chapter 2).

KittyhawkMontrose responds:

Hehehe... It's true! 😁

[Sue💀]

Thank you for expressing your one-sided relationship to Sue!

[Sue Alt Outfit]

I feel like this more or less would have been how Sue turned out if I knew how to draw better way back when!

[Corvid Kid: Chapter 2 The Intruder]

Congrats on getting this in before the end of the year! You now have a volume's worth of Corvid story under your belt.

Really glad to see we're now getting somewhere narrative wise. There seems to be a strained and distant relationship between Samson and his mother (you can see it on Delilah's face). Leaves a lot of speculation to the reader on the familial dynamics. Definitely seems like Delilah is forced to be both the big sister and mother to some extent. I really like how you utilize visuals to storyboard your chapter (such as with world building and action sequences), rather than having swaths of text explaining everything. It helps me engage with the story in a way paragraphs wouldn't be able to do. Don't exactly know if I trust the Corvid Shadow to be any kind of moral authority. He seems to just show up and take Samson's arm from the previous chapter (unless there's some greater cosmic force that is yet to be revealed). Regardless, I got my eyes on that Corvid Shadow.

Slight criticism. On page 14, I didn't realize that bird demon and Samson's Corvid Shadow were two different characters. Maybe an additional page with Samson's "Companion" appearing separately could have clarified that.

From one webcomic creator to another, I say keep it grinding. In a few years we may have something truly special on our hands.

PhasmaGORE responds:

Thank you! I appreciate fellow webcomic artists lookin out for each other! I think I understand where you are coming from on your criticism as I think that page 13 (Im not not counting the cover) feels weak in how it reads and I only realized it after I had already inked it. For the next chapter, I definitely want to improve my readability!